Thank you for your interest in Myth Making! The majority of your app looks good, but we'd like to see more fleshing out of the personality section, with examples backed by canon. Give us some reasons behind key points in her personality, why she's been shaped into the person she is.

We'd also like to see a revamp of the fairy tale powers. Abilities such as turning into a demon at night are acceptable, but the split personality and ability to see the dead aren't listed in the story, and the claustrophobia is more of a trauma and mental conditioning. As Cynthia hasn't really been through the story yet, she wouldn't possess the same sort of reaction as the princess.

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